Chapter 2 – Scene Three finished and updated!!!


Hello Alpheans!

I just finished the third scene of Chapter 2, and these people are at it again, saying and doing things that I’m not at all anticipating until they happen. I can’t believe what I just wrote.

When you go and read the rest of the scene, please note that the concluding text is in a darker color so you can scroll right down to it.

I really need feedback on this.

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