Chapter 1 – Scene One EDITED!


Hello, Alpheans!

I finished the editing work for Chapter 1 – Scene One and now it’s posted. There are minor name changes, some small edits in dialogue, and I’ve extended it to make a better lead in for the new Chapter One – Scene Two. Next, I’ll make sure that Scene Three meshes well with Scene two and matches the edited version of Scene One here. Be sure to tell me what y’all think!

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