Guess what, Alpheans!
Like it says in the subject line, I need a new ‘Bob’. What’s a Bob? It’s what I’ve taken to calling the ‘Beginning of the book’. I like what I have now as an introduction to the town of Torda setting, but again I find that I need to back up the story a bit (mainly because I keep asking the dangerous question: ‘But what happened before that?’). The new Bob will start the book by focusing on the Hungarian capital of Buda and I’ll be moving the confrontation between the Count and the Baron to the new Bob and expanding it. Then I’ll shift the focus to the town of Torda and the events there which will largely be what I have now.