The Jezebel Diaries

Jezebel - My initial concept

Jezebel – My initial concept

The Jezebel Diaries was my original attempt at writing the story which eventually became The Coming of The Chosen. This is the original concept which is still near and dear to me in a sentimental fashion, but there were some serious flaws in the story structure that forced me to abandon this approach. In all honesty, I don’t think my skill as a writer has evolved enough to handle the exceptional demands of the first person point of view, even though I loved the telling of this story from the central character’s perspective in her own voice. I’ve decided to include it here as an example of my earlier writing. I’m allowing anyone to read the Prologue, and the rest of it is available to beta readers.

The Jezebel Diaries

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